Plots And Theme
Learning how to develop a story so that you take readers on an unforgettable journey is key to becoming a great novelist. Here are 10 steps to ensure that the final draft of your book has a winning, memorable plot:
Apr 08, 2019 The plot (“falling in love”) provides the exterior action that proves (or disproves) the theme’s proposed argument (“pride and prejudice are both roadblocks to meaningful romantic relationships”). In turn, the theme provides a why to the plot’s how. Plot and theme are neither identical, nor segregated. As nouns the difference between theme and plot is that theme is a subject of a talk or an artistic piece; a topic while plot is the course of a story, comprising a series of incidents which are gradually unfolded, sometimes by unexpected means. Plot is often represented as an arc. To learn about plot in detail, read the article: “What is a Plot.” 4. Conflict: Every story must have a conflict, i.e. A challenge or problem around which the plot is based. Without conflict, the story will have no purpose or trajectory. Theme: Idea, belief, moral, lesson or insight. It’s the central argument that the author is trying to make the reader understand. This video explains how plot and conflict help to develop theme in literature, as well as specific plot elements to look for in order to determine theme in t.
Step 1: Study effective examples of plot development
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Reading is a great way to improve at any stage of the writing process because great writers give us inspiring examples of how to get each element of craft right.
Some writers are particularly noted for their command of plot. Even if their work lies outside of your usual genre interests, read their novels for insights. While you do so, keep a reading journal and note effective elements of their storytelling. Ask, for example:
- How do the characters in the novel change over time?
- What is the main sequence of events (what happens in the novel and when?)
- What are the locations the story takes place in? What benefit does each setting offer to the overall story structure and development?
A few experts of story development you could read: John le Carré, J.R.R. Tolkien (whose Lord of the Rings has been voted the best single plot arc in a multi-novel series), Terry Pratchett, and Stephen King. You can read the work of contemporary bestselling authors for insights (particularly regarding what is marketable). Yet many classic authors (e.g. Charles Dickens and Henry James) are equally good at taking story premises and propelling them through interesting and surprising twists and turns.
Step 2: Use a plotting process that will shape your story
Great plots begin with curiosity and good ideas.
It helps if your story begins with an intriguing hypothetical situation (for example, the premise of Orwell’s Nineteen Eighty-four: A tyrannical political regime has criminalized independent thought as ‘thoughtcrime’). A good story idea should be fleshed out through a focused plotting process that will shape your story, however.
Use Now Novel’s story outlining tool to brainstorm great story ideas and create a detailed outline from start to finish.
Developing a detailed summary is a useful exercise for letting ideas for characters and plot points grow and settle. You might depart from your outline substantially while you draft. Even so, the exercise will help you start thinking about your book as a connected whole.
Step 3: Create a timeline of your novel’s plot events
Developing a story is easier when you understand the ‘when’ of your story.
As an exercise, create a timeline of your novel’s plot events. Make each branch in your timeline a chapter, with a summary of the most basic plot details. For example, ‘Main character learns identity of parents, prepares to try find them.’)
If you aren’t intending to plot your entire novel in advance, create a timeline all the same. Fill it out in summary form as you draft so that you have a condensed visual reference for recalling where your story has lead you so far, and what the overarching flow of events looks like.
Having a document such as this helps you to navigate between the detail-oriented process of drafting scenes and chapters, and the structural challenge of seeing the greater picture.
Step 4: Make characters develop in intriguing ways
Once you’ve done all of the above, it’s time to start thinking about how your character(s) will develop.
At the start of writing a novel, identify each primary character’s main goals.
Start brainstorming how these coupled with personality traits could lead them to develop.
A shy college student who wants to become a leading scholar, for example, might encounter a lecturer with whom he establishes an uncommon, lasting friendship. Obstacles to the character reaching his goals could include scholarship woes or false accusations of plagiarism.
You can create detailed ideas for characters simply by following the prompts in the ‘Character’ section of Now Novel’s story dashboard.
Whatever your story idea, make your characters develop in interesting ways. Show how their wants (or fears) affect their choices. Show the consequences that lead from there.
Step 5: Make each of the ‘5 W’s’ change
In novel-writing and journalism alike, a ‘story’ is made up of the ‘5 w’s’ – ‘who’, ‘what’, ‘why’, ‘where’ and ‘when’. Who are the important characters in your story? What is the situation they find themselves in and why? Where and when does the story take place?
A great story doesn’t just contain satisfying answers for these five questions. It also shows some development in each of these areas.
Your main character could be a trainee policewoman living in a rural community, for example. She’s considering giving up her career path because she finds small town life stifling. Suddenly, a local triple homicide ropes her into the most daunting (as well as thrilling) elements of police work.
The ‘who’ can change: Perhaps the trainee toughens up and becomes highly competent in her job as a result.
The ‘what’ (her goal) can shift: She realizes her calling is serving her community, and this could be because of new, meaningful interactions and relationships she forms in the course of doing her police work.
She might eventually leave for the big city, too (a change in ‘where’), wiser and more experienced.
If you make each of these elements of plot change convincingly, you’ll take the reader on a journey and will have developed your story.
One way to make sure this development happens is to storyboard your book:
Step 6: Outline scenes to create a storyboard
Whether you use index cards or other small pieces of paper such as post-its, a storyboard is a useful device for developing your story.
Try to summarize the key events of each scene in as little as two lines, which of your characters it will involve, and what the scene’s purpose is.
You can do all this in the Scene Builder tool in the Now Novel dashboard, and import it to view alongside your working document using our free Google Docs plugin.
As you plot your novel and plan your story development, you can reorder scenes as your story dictates, until you have a sequence of scenes that makes sense to you.
Sometimes you’ll find the order of two or more scenes should be reversed. Other times you might find that an early scene might be better shifted towards the end of the story due to its content or mood. This process will help you make your story flow and develop smoothly.
Step 7: Learn how to develop a story using subplots
A subplot is a secondary or subordinate plot that supports your main story arc.
To use a well-known example, in Harper Lee’s famous novel To Kill a Mockingbird, the children’s fascination with their mysterious, reclusive neighbour Arthur ‘Boo’ Radley (and their eventual encounter with him) is a subplot to the main story (a trial exposing race politics in which the children’s father Atticus is involved).
In Lee’s book, events involving Boo Radley support the main arc. The children receive a practical lesson through their encounters with Boo. They learn that inventing fantastical stories about others and turning them into bogeymen is a dubious alternative to confronting fear of the unknown and getting ‘the whole story’ about a person. In this way, Lee uses her subplot to underscore the issues at heart of the story’s central legal trial.
Step 8: Incorporate character-driven and action-driven story elements
‘Change’ is what propels a story forward. It’s brought about by character-driven and action-driven scenes.
In a thriller novel, for example, character-driven scenes show reader the stakes (the main character’s loving relationship with their child, for example). This makes action-driven sequences such as high-speed chases all the more nail-biting and intense since we are aware of all the personal, cherished things driving the main character’s will to survive.
To develop your story satisfyingly, make sure you balance character-driven scenes with action driven ones.
Even if you are writing something less dramatic and violent such as a regency romance, the same applies. Show scenes where your main characters undertake mainly action-based activities – a carriage or train ride, for example. Use these as points of transition between scenes that deepen and grow your characters.
As you write and near the end of your first draft, it’s useful to ask questions about story development so you can decide whether or not your story shows enough growth and change:
Step 9: Ask yourself important questions about story development
Once you’ve written the bulk of your novel, ask yourself these questions about your story’s development:
- How have the main characters changed in the course of the story?
- Why have they changed?
- What have the characters (and readers) learned about the story’s central situation or premise that they didn’t know at the start?
- What are the core themes of the story? (For example: ‘Triumph over adversity’, or ‘the danger of obsession’)
Once you have answers to the above, keep them in mind while revising. Is there any point in the story where a small tweak could make these elements more apparent?
Perhaps your main character’s growth isn’t as clear as you would like. Or else there hasn’t been enough change or development to illustrate your central theme. Keeping track of your plot – not just what happens but the reasons for plot events as well as their consequences – will help you create a more satisfying story.
Step 10: Get helpful feedback on your story arc
Once you’ve looked over your plot and are satisfied that your story develops compellingly, share your work with other writers for helpful feedback. Get peer feedback from other writer’s for free in our critique forum, or work with a writing coach who will guide you as you resolve any patches or holes in your plot.
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Terms Related to Fiction - Plot and Theme
action –
the events that occur in the piece of literature
antagonist –
the forces against the protagonist; could be another character, a force of nature, or an organization, or other entity or situation which creates opposition to protagonist
arrangement of events –
how the events are structured in a plot; may be chronological, start in the middle of things (in medias res), or as flashbacks
carpe diem –
Latin for seize the day; sometimes, a theme in a fiction or poem
chronological order –
the presentation of events in the order they occurred in time
cliché –
worn-out phrase purporting to tell some general truth which no longer has meaning because of his overuse
climax –
the highest point of conflict; the point at which the action begins to fall to resolution (denouement)
conflict –
the friction between the goals of the protagonist (the main character – doesn’t have to be the “good” character) and the forces against the protagonist, called the antagonist
deus ex machina –
a plot contrivance to unexpectedly save a character from a seemingly inescapable, problematic situation often associated with a divine intervention; first used in Ancient Greek and Roman theatre where mechanical devices were used, such as a pulley to lower a god or goddess onto the set to take the character back into the heavens
epiphany –
the sudden insight a character has about him or herself, another character, or the situation
exposition –
a part of the fiction (or or drama or poem) which introduces the characters, settings, and conflict
falling action –
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the action following the climax ending in resolution (denouement)
fiction –
a created series of characters and events that has not actually happened
fictionalize –
to create a fiction from an actual event
flashbacks –
a technique used to show events that previous occurred by interrupting the present action and going back to previous events; generally used when a story starts in medias res (in the middle of things) such as where a scene opens during a trial and then some of the previous action leading up to the trial is told.
foreshadowing –
a literary device that gives a hint about what is going to occur
in medias res –
Latin expression meaning in the middle of things; an arrangement of events where the story starts somewhere in the middle of the action and then goes forward giving information about what happened before through narration, dialogue, or flashbacks
initiation theme –
a theme about being initiated into something new
ironic title –
a title which contains irony often helping to reveal theme
moral –
a lesson learned as a result of actions that occurred in a story
plot –
the sequence of events in the main action in a piece of literature
protagonist –
the main character, not necessarily the “good” character
resolution (denouement) –
the end; the result of the conflict, sometimes left for the reader to interpret
rising action –
the building of conflict and suspense prior to the climax
storytelling –
the communication of a series of events which may take different forms such as anecdotes, myths, fables, tall tales, legends, fairy tales
subject –
the person, object, or topic of focus in literature
subplot –
the sequence of events in a subordinate storyline in piece of literature
suspense –
the emotional reaction to the conflict in anticipation of future action, climax, and resolution
symbolic title –
a title which contains a symbol often helping to reveal theme
tension –
the result of the friction between the protagonist and antagonist
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theme –
the central idea in a story
title –
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what a story is called; often includes symbolism or irony